编剧才是一部电影或电视剧的核心

红尘客 评论 三生三世十里桃花 1 2017-08-04 11:52:54
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墨妙
墨妙 2017-09-16 11:54:38

Everything is perfectly expressed except for the very last paragraph. Grammar can be ignored, no big deal. However, those words failed to convey the meaning. Basically, the last sentence is meaningless (and I guess that's the point you wanted to make). You should have had somebody proofread it before you published.